Once again,
I am participating in the Snapshot Prompt over at Chasing
Revery. This week’s picture proved to be a bit of a stumper for me.
Normally, I look at one of the photos and a host of ideas pop into my mind.
When you’re dealing with shades of gray and some bare trees there is certainly
less to draw on for inspiration. But I like a challenge when it comes to
writing so here it goes.
The five
words that need to be included in the story are: Bill, Chisel, Tile, System,
and Bicycle.
Talk about
beating the system. John started on
his twentieth mile on the exercise bike. Placing it in front of his living room
window it was like riding a regular bicycle,
but without all the slick, snowy roads and icy wind to bother him. So much for
cable. John had no plans to line the pockets of the fat cat entertainment
moguls who lived off the wasted lives of the people.
As far as
that went, the electric company could enjoy a heaping bowl of
not-out-of-my-pocket-you-don’t. After the bill
they sent last month, John turned off the heat during the day and kept the
thermostat at its lowest setting at night. A full regimen of exercise kept him
warm as well as entertained.
John
pictured, in his mind, how each act of protest was like taking a chisel to one of the gold tiles that covered the mansion floors
of the rich and powerful. Yes, indeed. In another month he imagined them on
their knees, facing the brink of ruin.
For the
first time in days John smiled as he gazed out on the gray skies and barren
landscape that comprised his world.
For it stumping you, you did a good job. I love his dedication, even if I think he's crazy. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks. I was hoping that readers would have some sort of empathy for him. You know, a far away, detatched kind of empathy. :)
DeleteYou did an awesome job. I love his "stick it to the man" mentality that's got him making some good decisions actually, like exercising and reducing time in front of the TV...enjoying nature, even at it's grayest.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I was worried it was going to come out rather anemic.
DeleteWow, Randy, great job! If that's stumped, I'm impressed :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. Stumped. For me that meant it that an idea didn't jump straight into my head as soon as I saw the picture. Probably should have used a different term.
DeleteLOL
I'm feeling that way after the electric bill we just got. Some time in the negatives, plus an electric rate hike makes Shannon a sad girl. Good piece! I hope his world becomes a little more colorful.
ReplyDeleteShannon at The Warrior Muse
It doesn't get that cold here, but I figure it's the same way as it is for us in summer. Hope you are less sad this month.
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Riding the bike to stay warm! And healthy! Nice entry. Mine's posted, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I'll go check it out.
DeleteNice job, Randy! I like this for two reasons:
ReplyDelete1) I'm impressed John road 20 miles on a stationary bike without getting bored out of his mind.
2) You turned a life's micro-moment into a story. In real life, the imagery and thoughts you painted would only last a nano-second. Here we get to read the fleeting moment in slow motion and it's entertaining!
Well done!
Well thank you very much. I appreciate your comments. Hopefully people will read it and want to know a little bit more about this odd character when they're done.
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