Here is
another entry for the Snap
Shot Prompt over at Chasing Revery. The challenge is to create a story, or
poem, or some creative written item of 500 words or less using the picture
below and the following five words: Cosmic, Ghost, Pocket Watch, Vegetable, and
Train.
Henry
pulled his pocked watch out from his
vest and looked at it. The 3:45 was
late. Twelve years late. A train
hadn’t passed through their sleepy little town since just after the war started
– and ended.
That was
probably for the best; vegetation had long since covered a good portion of the
track outside the town. Henry made sure to keep the tracks within the town
limits clear and ready to use. Since there were no trains running anymore it
was the least he could do as an employee of the Central Pacific.
He looked
along the northern line. The city was still visible in the distance, like a ghost that reminded them of a long lost
friend. Somebody had to be alive there; or anywhere, for that matter. Other
than a few people who had wandered in on foot when the bombs disabled their
cars, no one had passed through town since the power went off.
A few of
the townsfolk had left. The lure of the big city sitting on the horizon, so
close and yet beyond their reach, served as a cosmic slap in the face. They
went to find family. They went to find answers. None of them returned.
Now the
town went about its business; growing vegetables,
raising cows, and checking everyday for the arrival of the 3:45 .
Very post-apocolyptic. I like it.
ReplyDeleteThank you. That was what I was going for. Glad I succeeded. :)
DeleteWonderful..watch out Stephen King!
ReplyDeleteYou know, flattery will get you everywhere. Thanks. :)
DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I appreciate you taking the time to comment.
DeleteWhoa! How wonderfully creepy, Randy. :) Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThank you. It turned out better than I expected. :)
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