What do you
think this blog needs?
Did you
say, “More fiction”? Well, if you did then the two of us are on the same page.
If you actually said something altogether different, then maybe you can change
your mind and we’ll be on the same page anyways.
I am
participating in one of the writing prompts over at Chasing
Revery. Carrie K Sorensen does a good job putting up some interesting
pictures from which to craft a story. I was especially happy with this one.
Hopefully, you’ll be especially happy with the story I came up with. Let’s find
out.
RAINBOW CHASERS
Most of
them did. After eleven years of rainbow chasing, you more or less got used to
it. As far as I was concerned it made the prospect of catching one all the
sweeter.
This one
was a beaut; the full spectrum of color, a solid eight on the Charley McFeeney rainbow
intensity scale, and the clearest example of Leprechaun sign that I had seen in
years.
The best
part of it was that this chromatic temptress had made the mistake of allowing
us a good view of where it went to ground. Already, my partner was checking his
maps to pinpoint the location.
“Five miles,
directly south-east,” said Mickey. “There’s an old farming road that will take
us to within a quarter-mile of the spot. Then we need to move fast to secure
the portal before that little green devil closes it.”
I pulled
off on the next exit and then turned left. The pavement gave out a few yards
past the highway and we were on a dirt road. That meant we were leaving a dust
trail that would alert the leprechaun to our approach. It took all of my
restraint to keep the car moving forward at a leisurely clip. Too fast and he
would know for sure that we were on to him, but a mite slower and he could
mistake the dust cloud as the just the passage of one of the local farmers.
With less
than a mile to go and the rainbow stayed in place. Not that it had to in order
for us to catch it. Once it started phasing the rainbow disappeared from view,
but the actual portal took a little longer to shrink into non-existence. As
close as we were now, there was no doubt that we were going to catch ourselves
a rainbow today.
The dusty
road led to an old red farm house, complete with dilapidated barn and a copse
of apple trees behind it. Somewhere in the middle of those trees was the
anchoring point for the rainbow.
Mickey was
out of the car before I could slide to a stop, camera in hand, a huge
victorious smile on his face. He left the door open and sprinted towards the
trees.
“Wait,” I
called after him. “Do you have your lucky charms?”
But he
didn’t. The bracelet with the silver symbols that would keep him safe from leprechaun
magic lay on the car floor. He was running headlong into danger.
Snatching
up the bracelet, I ran after him, not daring to shout his name for fear of
alerting the rainbow keeper to our presence. The rainbow still remained bright
and vivid. How could the leprechaun have failed to notice us by now?
My feet
pounded against the ground in a mad attempt to catch Mickey before he
encountered the leprechaun. He made it to the center of the copse before me. In
fact, he had made it to the center of the portal; brilliant colored light shone
all around him. And he didn’t move.
“Thanks, be
to you and your friend,” a shrill voice sounded from behind Mickey. Out from
the rainbow strode a leprechaun. Then another. And another. In total, a dozen
of the legendary creatures strode forth.
“It’s been
you two that have been given us such a difficult time over these last few
years. We decided to do a little chasing of our own.”
“I don’t
think so,” I said as I held up the charms in my hand and then pointed to the ones
secured around my wrist. “I have these.”
“Oh, and
are they lovely, but the truth is they only work on cartoon fairies and then
only to keep your cereal safe.” He laughed and then the rest of them joined in.
The copse echoed with their tiny outbursts of mirth.
“You
probably believe that malarkey about a pot gold as well,” the lead leprechaun
continued. “I came up with that one myself. What better way to get fools to
bring us what we really crave – SILVER.”
His smile
disappeared.
I turned to run. My feet wouldn’t
move and instead I crashed to the ground. With my arms, I pulled myself
forward. Slowly. Too slowly.
The pack of green bandits closed
in.
That was awesome. Now I know to stay the heck away from any rainbows.
ReplyDeleteGlad I could provide the PSA for you. ;)
Delete:) I'm so glad you wrote about leprechauns. This is a great story.
ReplyDeleteThank you. It sort of evolved. Originally, I had no plan to indclude leperchauns. But now I am glad I did.
DeleteOh rainbows...you do tease with your colorful-taunting-beauty.
ReplyDeleteExactly.
DeleteThis is fantastic, Randy! I love all the details in the story - the rainbow intensity scale :), the anchoring point, the Rainbow Keepers, the silver charms, the lore - it all sounds so reasonable and believable!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I was pretty happy with the end result. Normally, I'm a plot before I write kind of writer, but this time I only had an idea that I wanted this to be like a storm chaser, except with rainbows. The leprechauns just sort of popped up on their own.
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